You will have 20 minutes to plan, write and revise an essay about the topic below. Your response will be judged on how well you develop a position, organize your ideas, present supporting details, and control the elements of standard written English. You should write 200-300 words.
Try to outperform their competitors —> bring a sense of achievement and fulfilment —> boost students’ confidence and self-esteem —> bring both tangible and intangible benefits for students in general
反方: lead to stressed-out students
Work prolonged hours —> feel highly stressful because of lack of recreational hours —> have limited opportunities to take a break from the rigors of the academic world —> are highly likely to develop mental health issues including depression